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She was tragically cute by ~MotleyMitch:iconMotleyMitch:



Throw me like a stone

in a pond or in a lake

i'm nothing special or of worth

just an ordinary snow flake

millions fall every year

people just shovel me to the side

and forget this ordinary boy

i bite the bullet and go for the ride

in a world were ordinary is just that

its not good enough to hold dear

nothing worth a girls attention

so i'll stand over here

and i'll wait forever if i have to

even if i wait for nothing at all

it didn't work out the way it should

so i take another bottomless fall

i guess i can change my stars

but i can't be anything but ordinary

so i'll never get a nice girl

or at least not someone extraordinary

out of this world with personality

no nothing like that for me...

after all i'm just another ordinary.
©2009 ~MotleyMitch
:iconmotleymitch:

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this years entry that got published in an anthology of verse published by the canadian poetry institute of canada

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:iconsksand:
i loved this.

--
that halo above you,
is only a few inches away
from being a noose.
:iconmotleymitch:
thank you =]
cheers

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She was tragically cute <3
All he's got now is post grunge apathy.
:iconsksand:
No problem. =)

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that halo above you,
is only a few inches away
from being a noose.
:iconpaperleaves41:
I am an absolute fan of this. There is definitely a brutal honesty to it that you've got going on there. The ahh...I could change, I could search but what point is in that when it's not going get you anywhere. Definitely true for the pains of the masses, I think. Unfortunately.

Brilliant man. :)
:iconmotleymitch:
thank you =
take care

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She was tragically cute <3
All he's got now is post grunge apathy.

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